Good poem.. This probably need alittle bit more flow to it. Instead of:
everytime i say how i feel
it all falls apart
i fell like my heart has been peeled
my heart cant take it

Everytime I speak my heart
I find myself lost in the dark
And everytime I let go
It stays with a bloody mark...

something like that but dont listen in if im missing something just throughing out ideas 5/5