Dood. I haven't read an acrostic poem in like.. forever. Lol. Mmmhhmm. And I haven't written one since like.. Iunno Elementary school. With my name lol. Anyways. I like this poem. And the story behind it. It makes you think. Very nice.
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-Ying

The fact that the poem had short sentences and moved fast went with the image of a soldier running through a battle field. I really would have liked it if you would have slowed down but with this style of poem I can understand if that was a bit hard to do. It had a, not a good storyline because war is sad, decent story being told in a way that might leave a mark on your readers about reality of war.

Wow! That was great. Smooth. Usually these type of poems are hard to write, and they look listed. Your sentences flowed very smooth.
Thank you for sharing this with us. Made me want to go write one.

Woah..that had so much emotion..wow! that was beautiful!!!
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