This poem held a strong clear message, though repetitive it played out well, and your reminder only enforced that we should try and be kinder to those we love. IT's really vivid, your words go more in depth, and it not only tells but shows us what is going on leaving your readers, hopefully, not feeling sorry for the speaker but learning from the speaker's mistakes.
You might want to fix these though:
It's hard to breathe knowing that it's true (Maybe take out the that)
Now you're are gone forever (Maybe no yo are or now you're but you have tow things meaing the same exact words in that one sentence.)

Wow. This was amazing. I could really feel the emotions you were feeling. It's so sad. Though I hope none of this is true. The imagery you set was good also, I could picture everything in my head. Awesome job overall. Loved it! 5/5

`taleee xx

U really stuck to the point... sometimes when i do my poetry i jump around alot..... keep to it.....

Brandi Dumencic

Wonderful.
This poems overflows with style and emotion. And you stayed true to your moral throughout the whole thing.
Really an exquisite effort, I hope it sn't a true story though.
By the way I really like your creative titles! Good Job!

My eyes!! I just about started to cry.. I love this poem it was so..so..HEART felt. I felt as if I was the person whom lost someone and it was a horrible feeling.. I loved it though. So Great Job.

Truly a very sad poem!!! Great job...you made your point very clear!!

This is a really sad poem. A very good message you left in this one. Through a story, we can see someone regretting their final words to another. Very nice poem, sad and powerful.

Omg, so sad *reaches for tissues*
i will take your comment seriously, your poem has a lot of raw emotion, its great, i love it, well done