Short and sweet yet packed powerfully with tamed emotion. Such an enjoyable read. To fel that strongly about something or someone is very special.

Hey its short and sweet and i love it!. you are very good at writing poems. keep it up i love them.
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Love always Aimee xoxo

Hey Girl...I llike that poem...keep it up
Jennifer

Very pretty. nice flow to it... i quite enjoy! ^.^ really good write. you did an excellent job with the wording.

Precious - I liked this one..paints a picture of love being a fantasy when it really isnt...love is real feeling, that when you have it, your views on life change. Really nice.

Sammib

COOL! awwwww! It is well sweet. Ur really good.