5/5...very emotional and very well written. i could defiantly relate to this...beautiful babe i loved it!
.:Keke:.

Nice poem i felt this same way about someone before and then i finally just let them go and i been ok with out them keep up the good work. 5.5

Aww.. that is so sad! this had a great flow, nice descriptions, and emotion was just oozing out.. excellent write! 5/5

I really liked this. I can kinda relate. I don't know if this was about a friend or boyfriend. But in my eyes it was about a friend. Anywho..Back to the poem. It was really well done. Though the stanza's were short, You got your message across, And I could feel the emotions. Great poem! 5/5

`taleee xx

Really nice poem, it flowed well and there were some good rhymes. Good ending too.

It's shorter that alot of poems I read, But thats mostly what Ive been writing lately too. I love this poem, it's got alot of emotion, but you can't really tell who towards like a family member, friend, or certain someone

I liked how this was a shorter poem, it conveyed more emotion, like the narator was just so distressed long sentences didn't come easily, I don't know if that makes sense but I thought it added to the overall effect of the poem ^_^

I like this poem it is very good 5/5 keep up the good work love linda