I like this poem.. its really great!, nice job!

Torriee

I can really relate on this!! actually, i love this!!! anyway, keep on writing poems!! GO GIRL!!!

-Jemimah Grace-

Yeah. it is a pretty good rap! i like it! i was surprised at how easy it was to read (i usually hate poems that arent spaced out properly)
Great work!!

I really like the intense sentiment contained in so few lines. Really heartfelt and filled with what sounds a little like contempt for this person that you won't be missing.

My personal opinion would be to add some grammar, as it is at the minute it's basically just one huge sentence. Possibly break it up a bit, i think it would help to get the emotion across. Most grammar indicates a pause, i think it would intensify the feelings with pauses for the reader to grasp whats being said.

Overall great content though.
With a little structural ammendment would be a 5.
[4/5]

I really like this...nice message and I can relate to it alot! great job!!! keep it up!

Haha i really like this its cute lol and funny kinda lol or its just the way i think but anywho.. its cute 5/5