Comments : Goodbye

  • 17 years ago

    by HeIsMyDoRk

    OMGSH!!...this is soo cute...i totaly know how you feel n i juss want you to know that you will be able to move on one day..it took me 11 months but i finally did it!..good luck with it because i know it can happen i didnt think it eva would but then this guy daniel came into my life n you will be able to do it one day...if not with the guy that hurt you, with someone else...i am addin you to my favorites...you can go look at my stuff if you want n add me if you like it...buh bie..

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    I really loved this poem. The rhyming was great and the flow was wonderful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Lauren

    This is amazing!
    It's so beautifully written...
    5/5 all the way
    -Lauren