Wow fire an element of life nice poem maybe u can read one of mein 5/5

Another poem with a beautful view, I love the symblosim in it wonderful

The first line wasn't too great. Trying to have too many rhymes in one line makes the line sound sleezy.

It's different I'll give you that. I liked it because it was tender and heart warming.
I'm not sure I'd describe fire burning you as nice, and that's the feeling I got from the read. If you mean warming your skin when you're cold, then I think it could be worded better.
When you say "warm hot flame" there is no need for the two adjectives as they mean the same thing.
I liked the final line, very sentimental and a nice way to finish.
I enjoyed the read, keep writing.

Great epcei, it is very original and well written throughout. the flow is smooth and the descriptions fantastic.

This was awesome! Loved this line;
"you are my strength morning to night"
Really great poem here. Short but great. Keep up the awesome work, hope to read more from you soon. =] 5/5

`taleee xx