Comments : Flaming beauty...

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    Wow! I really loved this and it meant so much more to me than just a description of fire; yes it was that but i also got the insecurities of the narrator cleverly slipped in-an allegory i think its called and of course it rhymed which just puts the icing on the cake. Well Done

    Sondos