Comments : Things I can

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    OMG!! That is such a beautiful poem! I loved it so so so much! The wording was so perfect...

    I'm not going to get everything right. I'm willing to learn from my mistakes. Oh angel you're the closet to heaven i can get with out touching the clouds.

    I can't give you the world
    I can give you mine.
    I cant you give you heaven.
    just my love..

    I loved those lines in particular, but I loved all of it!! Wow, GREAT job!!! Love it, love it, love it!!! 5/5, but that just doesn't seem enough!!! lol You've got talent hunny! Fantabulous! Keep it up!
    -Ashley-