Your poem started out actually pretty strong showing the differences between the speaker and the boy. By the third stanza it began to get repeptitive about the phone calling or lack there of and to me that's where it starting to feel more like a vent and rant then the poem it started out as. I would suggest just reading through that part and seeing how ou could try and rearrange it. Just some suggestions.

That's sad, I like it though. Good job. Seems to make sense and flow and keep you wondering what you are going to say.

Woah, I thought you said you sucked at writing poetry!!??
No offence but your judgement is way off coz your poetry is awesome! :)

This is a really good poem, it reminds me of Rory and Jess from Gilmore Girls. Your rhyming was good and the message was sincere.

Great job! 5/5

I really liked this poem! It was very original, and I loved the beginning. How you started the first two lines of each stanza describing the guy, and the last two lines describing you. It was very original! My favorite stanza was:

"You're one of those guys who don't like any rules
You're the bad boy type "who dont need fancy schools"
I'm one of those girls who never does anything wrong
I'm the goody twoshoe type who studies all day long"

Keep up the good work! :) 5/5!

~BJ~

Wow, i was touched by this poem. it flowed smoothly and it played out nicely. great job.
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I really liked reading this poem, especially the first stanza ~ great job!

This is a great piece of work. I myself was a bad boy stereotype before but not all of us are heartless. I mean I met a special girl and it was like nothing else mattered. Anyways I'm blabbering one. Great poem, it was well written and it flowed nicely, it had good emotion and I liked how you used his words in qoutation.

Intersting, its so funny how many girls actually fall for the "bad boys" but Alex is true not all of them are that bad or cruel. I am very glad you realised that you deserve better though.