That is a great song please write the rest we want to see more ! ! ! Did some girl break your heart ? ? and your still in love with her huh ?

This was awesome!! I guess it would be a rock/heavy metal song? Eh, It was cool. Keep it up =P 5/5

.x.TaLeEe.x.

Gr8 poem...i totaly feel it. u should continue the poem. i luv it ALOT.

thanx for the commint:)