Comments : First Step

  • 17 years ago

    by chixanoodle

    You are a good poet u should be published

  • 17 years ago

    by Erica Jovie©

    I know just how u feel! i'm in love-( it took me an entire year to admidt that to myself) with my best friend named ransom! but he has a girlfriend so i have to pretend i'm okay with just being friends! you said that well and i love how u write what is on your heart! hey if you can will you please read my poem(s) down on my knees and/or miracles smile. AND PLZ COMMENT! i think you can relate!! thanx and God bless!

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I REALLY like this poem...it created a great picture. And I loved your quote about being a born leader, REALLY cool perspective on that well known phrase.
    ~Jules