This poem is so well-written! I love the way you described him. My favorite part was when you wrote that every moment your heart was beating, it was breaking. It was really moving!!!!!

I love this poem. I like how you use ur words to discribe him and ur feelings. Good Job

You have some great poems in here.. i love them all and you should definitley keep it up.. they actually have a great meaning to them too.. although before i say that i should find the right guy too..lol.. keep up the good work..

You amaze me when you write poetry! You are one of the best I've seen on here!