For your first haiku it was beautiful and much better than what I could have done. YOu can get a good feel of nature in it's beauty, something we often overlook, and it appeals to the senses as though seeing a painting. You use words that people don't often use to bring your words color and life.

You did a great job on this Haiku. All syllables were accounted for. Very calm and relaxing scenary you created. ( except the rain! I want sun!!! lol )

Great pice, you wrote this very well esspessially for a first Haiku, it had a very strong atmosphere about it and flowed very well

I just wrote my first haiku today as well, but it's nothing compared to this! it's amazing! I love it. Haikus are now my favorite type of poetry. Keep it up!