To tell you i didnt even know where u guys began n ended. you both did an amazing piece here.

I'm falling for you
My heart leads the way

^amazing way to open your poem.

For my love is everlasting
All the way till I die
Looking for your love
Loving every minute I see you

^awww... truly simple words but powerful n lovely meanin in them =]

In the halls
Nothing but you
Goes through my mind

^very imagie. nicely done

For I Love You
Oh so very much
Running through my head

^awww... very cute and sweet. flow was great. i woudnt change a thing

You go
Oh how I want you to be mine
Until the day I die

^i like how you ended the piece here. once again i got to say you guys did an amazing job here.
5/5 trulie

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