Mmm, all very well said, and very emotional and sad, but yet i liked it.
i also have a secret love that is starting to kill me slowly from the inside...... good luck. 5/5

Excellent poem, I am stunned.. Written very well, and such dept I could swim in it...

TORI THIS POEM GETS TO MY HERT IT IS EXACTLY WHAT IS HAPPENING TO ME I DONT KNOW IF I SHOULD TELL HIM THAT I LOVE HIM. AND HIS GIRLFRIEND IS MY FRIEND HOW DO YOU THINK I FEEL THIS POEM IS GREAT KEEP WRITING POEMS LIKE THIS