David, ur a joker! this poem is so blatently about CHLOE!! LOL! the minute i read the first line on in the second paragraph, 'Just observing your drawings..' TOO MUCH! :)

Beautiful poem. =] You did a swell job here. Thank you for the encouraging comment. Have a lovely evening and keep writing. =]

Your friend must be very happy to read this poem , beautiful write ,enjoyed reading.

Regards
chavii.

Seems like you wrote about someone who has alot of potential to become someone someday. Great poem, a lovely dedication. Keep writing.

Hey
Thanks heaps for the comment on my poem it means alot to me to know what ppl think about my writing!
See you around the site =)
xxx Luv Z.

Wow.. amazing poem! good flow, lots of emotion, and uses good language! great job! 5/5 thanks for the comment!