That is really good. and I know what you mean, writing poetry really helps me to get my emotions out and makes me feel better. You did a great job on this, the flow of it was good and you had a great word choice! Great job!!

I totally understand where you are coming from with this one. Poems help me to get out my deepest thoughts. Without it I don't know where i'd be. Great poem :)

Amazing! I can totally relate to this I have to write otherwise I feel that I would explode from all the things that I have kept hidden inside all these years.. I loved how there aws no rhyme scheme for this poem making it rhyme would have totally taken away from the message.. way to go thanx for the comments

I can totally understand what your sayin, I always try to write what I'm feelin.....but for some reason.....I cant, I would LOVE to just sit down and write down what I'm feelin. This was a very good poem, some people can relate to it!

I l.o.v.e.d. this! I need to aswell. I try to write to let out my feelings, But they don't ever seem to come out the way I want them too. Another awesome poem done by you. Loved this so much. Keep it up 5/5

`taleee. xx.

Though it's a bit repetitive, you can kind of feel the struggling writer just wanting to write their heart and soul and pain and hope it gets to the reader.

Very good peice, i wrote one one a similar theme once but think that you managed to convay the feeling of needing to write far better then i did. the peice is good flows well, and though aspects are slightly repetitive this works well with the overall theme

Ok, this was a pretty... sloppily done poem. I think you split the lines to soon. Here's an example:

I want to feel my senses
I want to feel them
Returning to me
No longer
Blocked out
By these
Oh so powerful feelings..

Instead of puuting:
I want to feel them
Returning to me

you could put:
I want to feel them returning to me

And instead of:
No longer
Blocked out

You could put:
No longer blocked out

I find this is a problem in alot of poems I read. Im only twelve, but it still drives me insane!

Trust me others deff. feel the same way. keep writing. its a great way to deal with things!

Nicely done. Powerful and emotional. You painted a clear picture of fraustration and pain. Good write. 5/5

Wow... another freaking great poem... im running out of things to say about your poems because they are all so freakin great, wonderful, fantastic, everything and anything positive about these i could say. I can connect to your poems and thats what i love most... and the repetition of "I need to write a poem
I need to let these
Emotions out
I need to end
The pain.." at the end just makes it a million times better. Much Love, -Jen- 5/5

Hi! i agree dat poems r a gr8 wai 2 let ur emotion out! luv da poem!

Woah!
This poem was just FULL of emotion!
Writing out your emotions in a poem is like...the cheapest therapy :)
Good Job!

Jen

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I can totatally relate to this Poem Jessy. Whenever I need to let my emotions out I grab a pencil or pen and start writting. I really liked this poem. Good Job. :D

Yup, writing poetry is the best way to get all your emotions out. Good stuff.