Aw that was really sweet. You described everything in this really well. and really portrays emotions of love. The flow and rhythm of this was really good and it really kept my attention. Great job on this!

This was a really nice one and I could feel the emotion in it. Got a good structure and great flow to it also. Keep up the great work. Amanda :)

Aww..such a sweet poem! It reminds me of my boyfriend ^_^

Jen

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