A very good poem honey , i love you very very much and each time i read one of your poems i love you just a little bit more!! thankyou for making me feel so special with your beautiful poetry

This poem is amazing he sure is a lucky guy :) again i'll say wow :)

Nice

Wow!! i love this poem! you two r in luv! thats great! i hope the best for you too!

That ones so good. Your really good at making it rhyme. I can never fit the words correctly to make them rhyme. But you do an awesome job.

Wow, what a beautiful poem.

OH!! This is so cute! This is beautiful and touching, and I love it! Nice flow too; it's great you have such a wonderful inspiration for you to write about. ^.^ 5/5

Heartz!

Grat poem ones again thanks for the comment on my poem

This poem is very nice...i poetry is the best way to tell someone how much u care them.. and ur this poem is showing how much he means to u.. grt jop.

How are you? its been awhile..and this is beautiful and im so happy for you!

♥ Ally

This poem is so great.
There's this person in
my life, that when I read this
poem it reminds me of them.
Thank you for pointing
that out, I'll fix it. :)

Aw, this poem is really sweet too. I'm happy for you, in finding that special someone. The poem had a really great flow. 5/5

marcella

This is a very wonderful poem. Your very talented. Keep it up

Jadee

Awww that is a great poem it really show how much your love is

Beautiful poem!
Very touching and very sweet.
You made youre feelings very clear.
He's lucky to have you.
Loved realing it
Take care

Very cute and wonderful, too bad we all couldn't be in such great deep love---love, tara

First I would like to say that I have read alot of poems on line and it is a very rare thing that I find one as sweet and pure as the one that you wrote. You really poured your feelings into your pen in this lovely poem. My favorite lines were:
" When your not there I want to cry
I always miss you before the goodbye"

Those lines were just so cute and sweet!
And the rhyme scheme was very nice and entertaining. I really liked the ending too. 5/5