I also extend my deepest sympathy to you and yours, I lost my sister 21 years ago, though Im sure not in the same circumstances, This was truly an exceptional write indeed, I wish you the best in life my friend. Timothy r

Hi.

I'd like to express my sympathies to you and your family for the loss experienced. I haven't lost a sibling before, and I certainly hope not to experience it. I really appreciate how you seemed to put so much of yourself into the tone of that poem. You're both grieving yet poised. You acknowledge the factsa and the memories and you've come to terms with what had happend (if not already). This poem really shows a rigidity in your indomitable spirit.

Cheers,
Colin

Ohhhh my sweet Albert....I'm so sorry as I've already told you...this was so beautifully written and from the most beautiful heart I know. Remember what I said, God will help you through. And I'm always here for you....Carol knowed you loved her and that was the greatest gift you could have ever given her....Take care, God Bless and you know if you need me, I'm here.
hugs, love Ann

Heyy a tOuching piece. very heartfelt lOt of emOtion..im sOrry for ur los. uve expressed urself really gOod.

*tear* Bert I am sorry for your loss, I understand it brings us a great deal of pain when we lose someone we love...still in hard situations your writing is still gold and beautiful!!! Sometiems I'm iffy on whether to tell someone "well they are in a better place" because I'm not sure how many believe in heaven, but this here shows you do and you already know that..no need to remind you then....Loved this poem your an outstanding writer!
Chelsey-Lynn

That is so sad

I feel so sadden by your poem, i really hope things are ok for you, your poem cntains so much sadness that could only be acheived from real life experiance, its a great write but im sorry to hear what caused it, well done tho 5/5...beautiful

Hey this is a gr8 poem not like the actual poem but the writing of it ..it makes me think of when my oldest sister was diein with luekimia i wished and wished she would betta but yeh i understand how u r feeling so if u eva wanna talk and u have msn u can add me on jec_devil01@hot..n i will try my best to help u through this tough time becos i no what it feels like to loose ur world so yeh...take care xxxjes

I fear this every day about my wayward sister, although i do not have belief in that better place to comfort me.
Your poem does though.
You are brilliant.
Im so sorry for your loss.
..xx

Such a sad poem =[ a wonderful peice of writing, you have a gifted talent. 5/5

Excellently sad Bert....