I would suggest just making the title lowercase. Otherwise, it was truly a sad day and still is. Always remember 9-11

Great peice, your descriptions and portrayals are wonderfully clear. it has agood flow and structure too. not much i can say by way of critism really as it is a very well written peice

Your heart doesnt seem to wander far from devastation, such a beautifully worded poem, wonderful in every instance. T

Very, very, very good. This is one of the best poems of this type Ive ever read.

You made me cry thank you for that poem it was great