Hi Joe,

I think we all reach this stage in our lives when we really dont know whats before us or even which path to choose...me for one definetly can relate to this poem....I think you said it all.......inspiring write.

Disaster of relieve?
^^ Do you mean relief?
This poemw as kind of repetitive but at the same time it was pretty good and made a lot of sense to me. The darkness could mean what we don't know is ahead of us but not really want to remember what lies behind. Nice write and goodluck.

Can you please read Wandering Soul it's for the same contest.

Yep, life certainly is a lot to think about. anyway wow...gr8 work. i love ur way w/ words! 5/5

Very good ,I guess you are in the boat with the rest of us not knowing what will happen.