I like the repetition of the first line it works really well

Cute, thoughtful, thought provoking, is this the point? I like it, it is diffrent.

~Blackrose1011

That is beautiful. Wow, almost made me cry, its so pure and refreshing.

A great poem and welcome to the world of poetry as it is the best world u can ever ask for

Wow i really liked it!

I really like it 5/5 Great job=]