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Wow, what a great open, very well written
Please comment my poems as well
thank you
P.s.-great job!

I loved that poem. It like had so much to tell in it, I felt like I was your bestfriend and I knew exactly what happend. That shows how you really explain what happens in your poems well. Thats a great talent. Take care, I'm adding you to my faves. Please comment on my poems as well...thanks