Comments : BABYGRACE

  • 17 years ago

    by Emi

    Very good. So very simple, and it allows everyone to take something different from it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I like this. You convey the depth of sadness quite beautifully, especially in these lines:

    "You think glitter & butterflies
    Are going to bleed from your wrists?"

    "In this bullet lies my
    Every hope."

    Awesome poem! Take care and keep it up~Holly