I understand what this is saying, but long story short, it rocks, keep it up suz

Nice work you cristian little girl :)

Matt

CHRISTIAN!!!
Get it right geeZ
anyway, it wasreally really great.
as usual.
very knowledgeable.
and some would have arguments over it.
I like that. lol
hehe
~Em

A hybrid of problems
Born out of our lies
They'll show you who god is
Child, cover your eyes

^^ That stanza gives this poem a little extra something...haven't figured it out yet, but that was my favorite part..DId love and enjoy the ending! Great writing..really liking your stuff!
-Krissey

HERE HERE!!!! magnificently written. chilling to the core.

Wow.. i loved this. It kind of made me think.. But it's very well thought out and the last stanza really stuck to me. Great job on this! 5/5

Interesting. I really liked the flow, and how the rhyme made it come along smoothly. Some of those stanzas really speaked for their own and sent a great message. I really liked the last stanza, too, because it brought the whole poem to a conclusion. The meaning was great.