Your poems are always holding so much depth to it. You'll do well in the contest.

Wow.. that was so deepp.. this was amazing! it flowed well and the emotion was just oozing out of it! i hope you do good in the contest! 5/5

A very deep and wel written peice, the flow and structure are seemless and and the content very well protrayed and very deep.

5/5

Very good poem! It speaks a message.

This was amazing. The 3rd stanza really stood out to me. Was a really awesome piece. Keep it up.

`taleee

That is really good. I love the way that you described everything. The flow and rhythm of it was really good and held up well, and it's very thought provoking. You did a great job on this!

OMG....I love your poetry, I'm so glad that I started reading your poems, I love this poem, it was so deep, and the meaning behind it was sooo good, I think you should win the contest...good job.
always jennifer

Great Sondos!! the way you have mixed ordinary happenings and lines with deeper meaning is outstanding.

brilliant piece of work. Looking forward to reading more.

love and peace
shobhana

This is really good wounderful use of words! 5/5

Even if it's about death, it's still pretty.xo

Wow, You really got a lot in there in such a short amount. You are a really great writer!!

Very nice metaphors and descriptions. What's this doing in the 3's?

Hmmmmmmmmm............deep and great 5/5 keep it up
Jennifer