This is a very good poem.
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Omg, I love it! Keep up the good work!

Wow this is a poem that really makes you think I like the way you made it so detailed, it was as if I were rite there feeling the pain. Hope for you to do better soon. Thankyou for the comment on mine.
God bless
Renee