Nice job i like how the lines rhyme. im trying to make a poem like that havnt had much luck thought keep it up

Aww thats really sad.
but i like it

to me, when i was reading it, it seemed like you gave two sides to everything you said... and i like that because i think theres two sides to everything

and your rhyme was catchy... :]

Cool poem:)
i like ur taste. the ryhme goes well. keep writing.

I loved this poem, though it's filled with so much saddness and emotion the way you wrote it I loved it. Keep up the amazing work. 5/5