Hey this is a really nice poem, I like the way you have set it out. Well done

dave x

Okay, well here this goes...
Your rhyme scheme kinda sucked, and the flow... didn't flow... at all. I was extreamly disapointed... You should have probably made it into more than two stanzas because - it was horrible. I would rate this a two, so I'm not rating.
Please, dont take offense. And yeah, I don't know what kind of person you are, but read my poems and rate justly. ^-^ But other than all that crap, I kinda liked the point.

I like this poem, I especially liked the point that came across with it. =)

x.xBrokenx.x

This poem.. inspires me.

I liked your poem - nice and sweet... May love treat you kindly.

I thought it was really good. i especially like the second part