Truthful write... A very deep message in this one. As Meena says there are moments we have to make the decision to what path we take. No matter what though, God shall be there. Enjoyable poetry :)

Does death truly mark the end of our journey or merely the beginning of another? A deeply emotional poem Luanne I enjoy your poetry so very much I find you and your words so inspiring and meaningful, with so much more than meets the eye. A great testament of your hope and faith this piece with many lessons hidden in your verses...well written darling :o) Eirisa xxoo

So true Luanne. Such an inspirational piece and thank you for sharing...take care, love Ann

Wow.. very good.. really made me think! good flow, and nice descriptions, keep it up! 5/5

Oooh, very well written! The message you've conveyed is one that holds unbridled truth.
This piece has impeccable flow and really kept my attention throughout.
Take care and keep it up~Holly