LMAO! ahahah that was a great poem. It definitely brighten my day.

one thing, I think you meant 'Mardi Gras' and not 'Madi"

Lol ....that was funny crap...i love it ....

Yayyy that was greattttttttttttt!!!! mwA!!

Nate 'the tie guy' --
This poem was funny ;; it made me laugh a little. But it was boring, so it kind of dragged on. I think you should make it shorter, and add more detail, or, take a little of the detail out. But overall, you did a good job.
Thanks much for commenting on my poem, it was much appreciated. Thanks!
4/5

Love Much,
Samantha Hollywood