Hey well this is a good poem. im sorry bout your b/f. if u need someone to talk to im here.

This is an amazing poem and im glad i found it... grrt job..hang in there ray!
love ya lots,
sore

I have never really heard any peom quite like this one
i am glad that the last stanza boke the rhyme scheme because it wouldnt have had the impact it did if you tried to have it all rhyme