Comments : With my love [Lyrics]

  • 17 years ago

    by jess

    [Verse 5]
    I wanna to be the one,
    That one for you,
    To try and get through.. together.
    I want to be together with you.. forever.
    ^^
    this verse was really good. i would def buy this sng if it was released!! great job hun!!!
    speak to ys soon hopefully!!!
    love ya love jes!!!!!!!!!!!
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by :::HOPE:::

    I really like that song! im blown away no joke i really liked it!

  • 17 years ago

    by emmerz

    Hey i write songs as well, and i can definitely see this one being awesome with music! being a lyric and not a poem, it doesnt have the same... i dunno what the word is, 'effect' i guess on the reader, but it's still cool and it would be a really cute song! write more lyrics!!!!

    Em@->-