I really liked this poem. great job keep it up... 5/5
chek out my poems sometime

Wow you have some serious talent. I loved this poem. B

eautifully written, great choice of words, and a fantastic flow.. which makes it; excellent!

Very well done =)

Lotsaaaaaa love
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Incredible write. This is emotional, and very well put together. Well done. xx

I cannot see through this fog of lies while I cannot be freed of this web of lies. Good writing though it needs a little work.