Well versed and thought out. I enjoyed the poems but I feel like you were holding back almost. I don't know what it is, it is still one of the better poems that I have read lately.

I mean don't get me wrong, I feel that it perfectly tells the story that you want to tell, Matter of fact it does it very nicely, I am just reading through it again because i do that from time to time.

"The who makes you cry isn't worth your tears, the one who is worth your tears will never make you cry" - I forgot but someone who isn't me.

That last quote has helped me through so many rough times, It was one of the main reason's i am still alive today.

I hope that you return the favor that i have to you in commenting, i noticed your post on our forums.

Five/Five

Dark Savior
"I go to sleep knowing that she is with another, that is why they call me the withered lover"

Nice poem, very nicely written with great word choices, you are a great writer, keep up the great job. 5/5