Kool poem britt! it sounds like a book i read once... :) but there were some typos.

Bluddy hell!!!! this is amazing! really is, u write way better than your age! spooky thought that poem, i will lock my door 2night! lol,
keep it up
love and peace tom xxx

Omg that is so totally like the film
a stranger calls
you seen it?
anyways tis verh good =]
keep up the good work
5/5
lovelove
Alice
xxxxx