Oohh.... what a topic.. wow, i loved seeing this poem... very logical aspect of life, though i always thought it would be very hard to pen these words into a poem-- you did a great job....

The last line.. it holds a lot of meaning.. it's soo true... we're all lost in these mazes of life.... nice to see that you're trying to find a way out...

Much Love,
Ipsita

Yeah, different style of writing . Good poetry to read. :)

Pretty good poem. way different then anything i had read before. great choice of words.. i love these two lines We are happening because we believe
Life is endless and I mean it
its very true.. keep it up
Dee