Comments : My war

  • 17 years ago

    by Krzysztof J

    I felt the emotion there, its sad but at least i can relate.
    keep it up.
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Hi, I loved this poem , deep and moving

    Knives are plunging through my heart,
    my stomach continues to turn,
    glass shards flow through my blood,
    and the darkness in my soul, still burns

    well written ,really enjoyed ,,,,,,,,,Tracy 5/5