Comments : Two Truths

  • 17 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    I don't know anybody who hasn't made mistakes. For some reason the old line of 'honor among thieves' came to mind while I was reading this.

  • 17 years ago

    by David Moss

    Very good! - something everyone can relate or aspire to. I like your free style from traditional rhyme. And many thx for feedback on mine, especially for noting my twist on words to change the entire message in Time Heels All Wounds. Cheers, and good writing - DM

  • 17 years ago

    by Victoria

    This is wonderful! I love it so so much! Everything you said here was just perfect! We all make mistakes, but we learn from them. And that helps us to grow stronger. Marvelous!

  • 17 years ago

    by J Lau

    Such a sweet and heartfelt poem. It's pure and emotional. Love it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Aww I like this... It was also sweet [though not exactly to the point XD]. I'm glad there are still some good heart filled people out there...ones that won't cheat or say I love you without meaning it. I won't say I love you, but I have cheated, though I will never do so again. I'm ashamed of what I did and promise never to do it again...

    Take care.

    xDarkSuicidex