Wow..
Sad but amzing.. It was great and flowed beautifully.. Keep at it..!!

I really liked this one!! UR profile said that you like to write about suicidal poems, but you're a very happy person. Are these things you have experienced? Either way, you are a very talented writer. :-)... I will continue to keep tabs on ur site for new stuff!!

I just love it, everything about it.
great flow, great emotions and well selected words. 5/5

Nice . sad . good :] =\

You've done such an amazing job writing this.

I wanted to keep reading from the very first word.

I loved the part about how forever has to end.

So deep, yet so true.

Fantastic job :)