Wow this is very sad.

I love the repetation of the last phrase coming back in the first phrase of the next stanza. That's very beautifull.

This poem really has the flow it needs. Also the moments of silence. That makes the poem even more dramatic

It's a very powerfull write. I'm truly impressed.

Very well done

Lotsaaa love
-xxx-

This poem is amazing i have poems liek this..i forget their titles but i lvoe the way you reapeat the last line before u use it..thsi is amazing......rly no joke..how long have u been writing? jw keep it up buddy...

Lissa

Been writing for about a year, maybe a little bit longer.