Comments : My mind

  • 18 years ago

    by sfiawong

    The whole is lack of structure,
    I am should not wrote as im, at least I'm. There should not being using a article 'the' before worry. but I like this sentence: Who can "feel" without worry.
    answer with two more sentences:
    They "love" without their minds
    They "live" a day with their words

  • 18 years ago

    by Too*In*Love

    I did this quickly but on the spur of the moment so there are some mistakes, like the "im" bit etc. Thanks for the points. Glad u like the last bit.