Hey tim
that was realy good very touching.
i liked it a lot ive already read 3 ties so u should feel apreciated
thanks
~em

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~Really
~it
~times
~you
~appreciated
~Em (always capitals)

thank you for your time
~Em

I really enjoyed this poem. it was full of emotion and gives truth to our actions. beautiful poem! 5/5