Structually wise, this poem is perfect, and also in the meaning, it is good, but it can use more details and you can extend it to make it even more depressing than it is.. like maybe a flashback of the good times you had together, or something like that

You are most welcome...

Great job! i really felt what you were saying! keep up the good work!

**meggie**

I understand what you mean i mean i just broke up with my boyfriend and he left me with one last kiss. that's all i have.

Oh my god!! I can really relate to this poem
me and my ex didn't really say good bye and it was hard without him and first and I kept thinking of our last kiss!! 5/5 well done

Wow.
i feel like this, too!
and i don't think LOVE sucks, just the BOYS.
thanks for the comment,
and wonderful poem!
5/5
!LaureN!

Wow... nice poem... just dont let guys get you down... they suck anyway... i liked who you wrote the poem too...
*~Zkey~*

Awesome!!!
ty for the comment
this poem is so beautiful
shot but sweet
so cute
you have some talent gurl!!!
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WOW..your right i do like this one! I can relate to it so much! Keep up the good work!!