Woohoo, go me!!

Really sad poem but really good way u explained the story. N quite nice ending!

Aww what a sweet ending.. not going to comment on all ya poems lol.. but am going to read em all when i get more time, they're great! xx

Great peice, the flow and structure are perfect throughout. the content is well portaryed allowing trh eideas to run into each other well and the expressions are powrerful.

5/5

Wow this is so sad, i can relate to it fully, coz i made a few of my friends the same promise. Its so hard but for them you gotta keep it. Beautifully written hun 5/5

Wow that is amazing I loved it!!! Great job 5/5

Liked it. Goo Shauna great job! =)

I'm impressed. it's a gd poem written in a gr8 way.

Wow...I really like this because i totally relate to this...I made a promise to my friends that i wouldnt commit suicide too....even though sometimes it just hurts so bad and i want too.....but im doing this for them! im living each day for my family and friends....sometimes it hurts but....i guess you have to live with it....i have to live with pain each day of my life....
Anyways great poem i loved it and i loved the emotion 5/5
love,
Steph

I really like this...i can relate because my friends and i all made promises not to commit suicide....the promise is hard to keep but you have to keep going because of the people around you who care about you....perfectly written......5/5.....good job

Ahhh!!! your too amazing for me!!! lol! your so good all your pomes relate to me!!
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