Hey, that was really really good. Better then my poems. lol. You're a really good writer. Keep it up ok?
--Silver

I like it...it has... "feeling" lol

Awww how cute!
love u
lol

I love you boo

Thats such a cool poem!! so different to all others. =D u have a unique way of writing,
keep writing, u have so much potential. =D
xxx