Keep up the good job nice choice of words.

It was a nice poem. Beautiful in fact but the minor grammar things is what threw me off. To should be too when desrcibing things such as:
It's almost to much to bare.
and so forth. I liked the repetition. It was just those minor details that I noticed right away.

Nicely done. One comment... "almost to strong" should be "almost too strong". Otherwise, good write. 5/5

'Fluttering Hearts And Shaking Hands'
by Akina Hearts Jarrad

"It's almost to[o] much to b[e]ar[X].
This haunting feeling that lingers deep with-in." >>> Within is the way to go unless you had a specific use of the hyphen to indicate something in the poem. :_) > lip to lip would sound more poetic and is consistent with 'arm in arm'......

Aww that is really sweet. I loved the way that you described everything. You had some great word usage. My favorite stanza was:
Growing fears that are soon brought to the surface.
Repeating questions, that remain unanswered.
Silence stinging, with words unspoken.
That line really stood out to me. You did a great job on this! I loved it!

Wow. very very good! excellent poem! amazing imagery, brilliant descriptions, impecable flow, and so much emotion! what more can someone ask for? wonderful job! 10/5!

I love it. So yet again Lovely Poem Megan.

Love MKKA!